Zoe

Posted in Year 4/5

I was very freaked  out when all I could see were two red eyes and I think it is a alien from out of space. Ho hi my name is Lilly Rose. I’ve got a mum and a dad and a young brother. My young brother called Oliver he is a pain when I’m trying to do my homework. I’m trying  to ignore him. But guess what  he was sick all over my homework. But then  tomorrow I’m going to get told off by my teacher. My mum  told me to say this” My brother has been sick on it.” Then i did do that and i didn’t get told off.

Amy and Millie

Posted in Year 4/5

One cold dark night I went out in the forest and had a little walk I heard a strange noise it was like a r0arrrrrrr I was scard to deaf. I saw a huge gagantic monster and all I could see wre two red eyes appear from nob wear I heard a stomp coming closer to me and I was super scared because then I might get lods of dreams and might get extreamly scared and wake up crying. I couldnt believe my eyes.

Jack

Posted in Year 4/5

One dark night I snook out side to play with my freind’s.  We went into the enchanted forest the say nobody has came out alive.  We were afraid but at least we had stuff to procect us.  My freinds are called Callum and Matthew.  We walked in slowly we were not sure at first but we went in.  All I could see were two red eyes…

Poppy

Posted in Year 3/4

One dark and gloomy Halloween night Emma was just getting ready to go trick or treating when suddenly she said “all I could see were two red eyes staring at me.”  Emma shouted loudly  with fear.  “Muuummm.”  she shouted with fright then her Mum came running quickly down the road” what is wrong Emma?” “Mum look at those scary red eyes” said Emma “come on Emma look it is only a pretend mask don’t be scared.” Just close your eyes and get a sweet and carry on to the next house.” You will be fine now.” explained Mum. “I think I will be fine to.” said Emma curiesly…

Macey

Posted in Year 3/4

One gloomy night I went trick or tricking with my mum. I nocked on number 9 and when they opened the door and all I could see were two red eyes . When I saw the red eyes I hid behind my mum after that I didn’t want to do any more trick or treating so I went home. I saw some red eyes looking into my front room then I shouted “mum come and look at these red eyes because they are scearing me !” My mum quikly pulled the mask of and it was my cousin Billy and he laughed . Billy said  “did you like my mask”

Max

Posted in Year 3/4

On hallowen night I was tric or treeting with my freind Donkey kong then I sore a figure stareing at me then Donkey kong all I could see were two red eyes then the gloomy figure hitmatised Donkey kong.  The dark figure rased away with Donkey kong I chased after him I rased faster faster faster and faster but I could not reach him the gloomy figure rased  on and disapeared into the darkness “noooooooo” I cried  “but I carnet give up now”  so I raced faster and grabed Donkey kongs hand an I gave him a great big slap and raced and raced away with Donkey kong.

Kate

Posted in Year 3/4

One gloomy and spooky Halloween night I went out. I went trickle treating. When i got to the third house i knocked on the door but no one came came I knocked again and someone came “aaaaahhhhhh” I screamed ” it looks so real”  I shouted, all I could see were two red eyes i ran up the bank like I was in the exiting Olympics! The next cloudy day I saw the man who I saw last night but he was carrying the red eyes in his hand.  “you really scared me last night ” i know”  Eventually the two became best friends and never had a argument ever!

Hattie

Posted in Year 3/4

One frosty morning Peter got out of bed and he could see red eyes.  He went downstairs for school.  It was time to go for snack at school. When she got outside she said to her friend ” all I could see were two red eyes this morning .  It was time to go home and she told her mum what was happening.  It was the morning  and he saw a vampire with red eyes.  They spent some time together.  Now they finally got back home and they asked each other if they wanted to be friends.  And they were freinds for the entire life.

Sullivan

Posted in Year 3/4

One gloomy hora nit there whas to boys plaing in The forist.They were having lots off fun Then They heard sumfing coming….from.The darcnes it was sceriy One of The boys said “lets gow hom now way Im gowing To see what it is ok” lets gow and see what it is in The darknes because all I could see were Two red eyes….stering at me in the darknes of the woud He whent to the red eyes then whent mor ferver awhey…..and then the boys sor it whas a puncen wucen.

Bradley

Posted in Year 3/4

One cold wintry night it was the day before my bithday i went out for my presant and i colud see tow red eyes steriing at me i was terrefid i junpd up and it was my mate but it went silons for a houre cus to red eyes wer ther and it was frank. And frank stilcome runing at me and my mate but donke kong was on  frank team donke kong come patring at me frank in gig aftermy mate but it was going dark nilly to mid night. Now it was a disotfey…focrati for lifh  so i  ktrati kid him and he got killd.

Leeloo

Posted in Year 3/4

One spoocy halliween night 6 frends gatherd for an inportnt meeting for the go gerl club thay had been been called to gether by Leeloo the cheef of the club that thay had made. Leeloo had called them together becus everywere she went she falt layk someone was foloing her. Thay where all rilly rilly scard but wen thay had  decaydid that Leeloo was just amjning it thay were all fine so thay went to get reddy for tric or treeting wen thay had  gatherd bac to gether thay decaydid that thay will split up for halerween thay went tric or treeting. So thet’s cach upon wat Macy and Emilly is doing, in the disterns she cullde see somefing red gloing so thay shook there hed’s and then all I culled see where to red eyes stering at me…

Jack

Posted in Year 3/4

One stormy night in a small house there was a boy caled Tom
Now  would you  like to ear a seacrat? Tom was absloutly terified of stormes but this time he was going to be brave. Tom was just setling down to sleep when he heard a deep growl which sownded like this grrrrrrrr Tom froas in his traks. What was that? thort Tom so he went to investigate. Tipto tipto tipto Tom crept to the back door.When he opend the back door…he saw two red eyes! Arrrrrrrr screemd Tom and raced back to bed. Tom didn’t get a wink of sleep that night. The next day a tiyerd but exited tom toled his fiend Jo “and all I cauld see were two red eyes” said tom “very intoresting” said Jo and did you no those two red eyes still apear at toms house every time there is a storm.