Daniel

“Wow we’ve found it”  It was the great golden armour.  “It is beautiful but it is surrounded by horrible scorpions.”  “Don’t worry we’ve got swords”. They quickly got down the hill then behind the trees they saw a fifty foot scorpion. “We’re not scared” Moby ran behind a tree “I’ll do it on my own”.  Then he climbed the biggest tree he could see and saw him, he sliced the scorpions head off his blood was like a volcano.  Moby came from behind the tree and hugged his friend Tim really tight.  Then they went to the great golden armour.

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  1. Well done, Daniel! What a great adventure story. Those scorpions sounded deadly. Well-written and imaginative. Good work!

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