Ellie

One sunny day there lived a little girl called Sophie. She lived in Mexico. She went to her room and played with her black dog then she went to the park where a robber stole her mum’s bag. They shouted for help. ”How can I help you? said the policeman. “A robber stole my mum’s bag.” Just then pushing his way through the policeman caught the robber and gave Sophie the bag back. The robber went to jail. Sophie went home and had some tea. Then she watched TV and went to bed. She was glad the day was over. Her mum was really happy as well.

One thought on “Ellie

  1. Hello Ellie,

    Sophie is a good name for a character. It tends to mean wisdom. In your story, Sophie was wise to call on the help of the police when a robber stole her mum’s bag.

    You have shown me you knew how to use the prompt while telling your story of crime and justice. Well done! I hope you continue to enter the 100WC.

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

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