Jack

Once upon a time there was the Lion who was a king and a brave monkey. The monkey lived in a huge tree and it had bunches of bananas. He always had some. One day he ran out and he decided to look for some more. The monkey went past the king and the king asked “how can I help you?” The monkey explained that he needed bananas. The lion said “I will help you to find some more.” So they went to find some more bananas in the jungle. They searched and searched but they could not find any! Do you think they’ll ever find any?

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  1. Jack,
    Well, it seems you have left your readers hanging! Did they ever find any more bananas? Be mindful of punctuation use when writing speech. A very entertaining 100WC–keep up the good work. (Teacher from Ocean City, NJ, USA)

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