Josh

Once there was a half monkey half bat, his name was Dobbler. He was a wild and free animal UNTIL he was captured and put into a box and tranquillised. When he woke up he was in a zoo. He aked where he was and then a tiger and elephant said “Your in a zoo where we are all mixed up.”

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  1. Hi Josh, thank you for entering your 100wc this week, it was a great prompt and I really enjoyed reading about your Dobbler. It was such a shame he was captured, I would love to know how he got on with the elephant and the tiger.
    Next time try to use a few more adjectives to describe your animal so your reader can create a picture in their mind.
    Keep up the super work Josh 🙂
    Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)

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