Lydia

The policeman asked  ’How can I help you?’’  The little girl said ’’ I’ve lost my parents and I’m hungry. ” The policeman said  “well we had better go and find them then”  She said  “yes”  in a loud voice.  Only a minute ago, the policeman said  “you will just have to stay with me.”  And she did.  She shouted  “thank you.”  Its a summer morning and the policeman said “what’s your name?” “Yasmin.” Then the policeman said  “that’s a lovely name.”  Carefully, the policeman took the little girl to look  for them again. She found her lovely parents and they lived happily ever after.

3 thoughts on “Lydia

  1. Hi Lydia. What an interesting 100wc with some good use of speech. It was a little confusing at first. I wasn’t sure what she had said and in what order but you had some good ideas so keep writing and checking as you go.

  2. What a lovely story Lydia, and I liked the happy ending. A policeman is certainly someone who would ask “how can I help?” Good idea for a story.

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