Thomas

One sunny day Tom was playing football for  Town Football Club. Near the full time whistle Tom was fouled and really hurt his leg. Unable to move his leg the ambulance took him to the hospital. On the way to the hospital they went over a beautiful lake. Later that day they got to the hospital and the nurse asked “how can I help you?” Tom replied “I hurt my leg playing Football”. He went have an x-ray it showed he had broken his leg. Tom went to have it plastered. After a week he was at home and he said “I love you” to his mum.

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  1. Hello Thomas. I thought you had some really interesting sentence openers here, such as ‘Unable to move…’ and ‘On the way…’.

    Have a look at this sentence now: Later that day they got to the hospital and the nurse asked “how can I help you?”

    The opener of this sentence makes it sound as if the ambulance took a long time to get to the hospital. Can you think of a different one to show that they got there quickly?

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